Saturday, January 24, 2009

The 5 paragraph Essay

You do not have to be a wizard to learn to write excellent five-paragraph essays. You do need some basic skill and practice. At this site, you will find the information you need to learn how to write the essay as well as some writing prompts to help you develop skill. With a little bit of effort, you will create your own written wizardry.

Because the five-paragraph essay is a chosen vehicle for measuring a student's writing proficiency, it is essential that each master this patterned format writing to score well. As part of that patterned process, the student needs to develop specific thinking and organizational patterns that will aid in the timed creation of an essay that state and other testing is demanding. To help the teacher and to aid the student to succeed in this form of writing is the purpose of this site.

Proficiency in writing the five-paragraph essay is not only important to pass the test, it is an essential first-tool-basic for research papers for all levels of schooling, and a simplified mainstay basic in writing reports within the professional world. Mastering this form is a first step to success.

The target audience for the resources of the site is grade five through early high school. Many resources referenced or presented here are excellent for all age levels. Some may need adaptation to be appropriate to individual needs. With the use of cut and paste and a word processor, this is an easy task. However, be sure to follow copyright guidelines and cite sources as is appropriate.

Having a good example or exemplar is a fine way to help to understand just what is expected in good writing. Here are some. Examine them. Look carefully at them, and learn from them. When you have done some writing, compare your writing to one or more of the examples at an appropriate level to see just how your writing stacks up. If it does not, then note what is different and work on those things to make your essay writing better. Self examination and evaluation are necessary steps to becoming a competent essay writer.

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Monday, December 29, 2008

Hey everybody

Happy new year! I wish good things!!!!

Wednesday, December 3, 2008

Present simple

Hi everybody! I'm The Present Simple Girl. I like habits and routines. I always do the same things and at the same time. For example, I always drink two glasses of milk in the morning and I usually arrive at school at twenty five past eight . I often wear jeans and T-shirts. I love pop music. I also love animals and plants. I have a beautiful garden.
I live with my parents and my brother, The Present Continuous Guy. He is very different from me. He never arrives on time for lunch. He likes new clothes and fashion, and he doesn't listen to pop music. He plays hard rock in a group called "Metal Bananas" . We are in an English club called The Happy Verby Gang. We go to the club on Saturdays.

Saturday, November 29, 2008

My tale's name is kind and 3 daughters. It is very interesting .

The body text:

King and his 3 daughters lived in a castle in a faraway land. One day while the king was thinking about his daughters, he had an idea. He farmed a plan for finding husbands for them. When it came time for the 3 daughters to marry, the king announced his plan. He said “I’m going to take 3 jewels to the mountain in the center of the village.The young men meet together there everyday. The 3 young men who find the jewels will become my daughters husband”.

Next : The next day the king chose 3 jewels- an emerald, a ruby, and a diamond –and take them into the village. He held them in his hand and walk among the young men. First he drop the emerald, then the ruby, and then the diamond. A handsome man pick up the emerald. Then a wealthy prince spotted the ruby and bent down to pick it up. The king was very pleased. But then a frog hoped toward the diamond and picked it up. The frog brought the diamond to the king and said “I was the Frog Prince. I claimed your third daughter as my wife”.

When the king told Tina, his third daughter, about the Frog Prince, she refused to marry him. When the people of the land heard the news about the frog and the princess, they laughed and laughed. “Hae you heard the news” the people said to each other.

“Princess Tina is going to marry a frog”. Tina felt terrible. She was very lonely and unhappy.

One day Tina went swimming. The water was deep and cold. Tina swam for a long time and became a very tired. While she swam back toward the shore, she lost the desire to live. She quited trying to swam to safety. She drown when the frog suddenly appeared and with all his strength pushed Tina to the shore. He saved her life.

Why did you save my life, Frog? Because you was very young and you had a lot to live for.”

“No, I don’t ” said the princess. ” I’m the most miserable person in the whole universe”.

“Let’s talk about it” said the frog. And they began to talk. Tina and Frog Prince was sitting together for hours and hours. Frog listened and understood. He told her about himself and his own unhappiness and loneliness. They shared their minds and heards. Day after day, they spent hours with each other. They took, laughted, played and worked together.

Important: The frog changed King

One day while they were sitting near the lake, Tina bent down and with great affectin, kissed the frog on his forehead. Poof! Suddenly the frog turned into a man. He took Tina in his arms, and said “You can saved me your kiss” Outside, I looked like a frog, but you saw inside and found the real me. Now I’m free. An evil wizard had turned me into a frog until I found the love of a woman with a truly good heart. When Tina saw through outside appearances, she found true love. Tina and the prince returned to the castle and got married. Her 2 sisters, she discovered, were very unhappy. The handsome husband ignored his wife and didn’t talk to her. The whealthy husband made fun of his wife and gave her orders all the time. But Tina and her Frog Prince lived happily ever after.


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Poster conference


Save nature!!!


If there weren’t earth, human would live, wouldn’t they? so I’m sure you agree with people and nature contact each other. Nature gives us people to live water to drink, air to breathe and food to eat but we want more and more things from nature. As a result nature is being dangered of extinction. People develop, the more nature destroys.

One of the majors problem is water pollution. There are very little clean water resource in the world. It is polluted a lot because factories put their waste into the rivers and lakes. Consequently, people get decease and sea animals die.Due to we can’t live without water long time, we must protect and respect it so that we live. In our country, forests are being destroyed much. It depends on people. They cut down many trees to build houses and use flues. Consequently, wild animals die and lakes die up etc. In conservationists have well paid, they will be responsible and they can help to save forests. In addition to this, government should punish people who steal trees.

One the biggest issue in UB air pollution. Fumes of cars, ger district and industries causes issue. Ged to reduce nuovernment nmber of cars and give to people apartment. If they can do it, this will be solved.
Next important problem is rubbish. You can see coastes everywhere in our city. Industries on people. To solve it, firstly there will be many rubbish bin. What is more, eachperson ought to try and we need to recycle trash.

All beautiful things of our environment is disappearing because of man made. If we want, we have enough time to decide these issues. We can clean water, protect forests and air pollution. So our participation is very essential to save nature!!

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6-r bie daalt

6-r bie daalt
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1.on 2.have being 3.of 4.borrow 5. finish 6.to(no)
7 pass 8 pasted 9. speak 10. tall
11. waiting 12.watching 13. to learn
14.damage 15.luggage 16.talking 17. on carring
II
1b 2a 3a 4c 5c 6c 7b 8c 9b 10a
11a 12c 13b 14a 15b 16b 17b 18b 19a 20c
21a 22c 23a 24a 25c 26a 27c 28c 29c 30a
31a 32c 33a 34a 35b 36a 37c 38b 39b 40a
41a 42c 43b 44b 45b 46a 47c 48c 49c 50b
51b 52c 53a 54c 55a 56b 57b 58a 59b 60a
61b 62b 63c

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Monday, November 17, 2008

Bie daalt 5 /key/
I
1c 2a 3b 4c 5c 6c 7a 8a 9b 10b
11a 12a 13b 14a 15c 16b 17b 18c 19b 20c
21c 22c 23a 24a 25c 26c 27b 28a 29c 30a

II
31a 32a 33a 34a 35a 36b 37a 38b

III
39c 40a 41d 42b

IV
Architecture
Was talented
Famous
Creative
Disasterous
Destruction
Most impressive
Beautiful
Living
V
1c 2a 3b 4b 5a 6a 7a 8b 9b 10b
11a 12b 13b 14a 15c 16a 17a 18b 19b 20a

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